Well I guess my blogpost STYLE has been called in to question. More "like prose" is what I've been told I need to make these. I knew writing limericks was the wrong way to go. Look where it got me. So here it goes. or, should I say, here it prose. We're on the path. We've got some scenes in the works and we have a shape and a direction. Things are looking good. We have one basically complete scene. What more do you want, Martyn? Johnny? Prose enough for you? No? Well, here's the full text of one of my favorite short stories, A Serious Talk by Raymond Carver. How's that for prose? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ VERA'S CAR WAS there, no others, and Burt gave thanks for that. He pulled into the drive and stopped beside the pie he'd dropped last night. It was still there, the aluminum pan upside down, a halo of pumpkin filling on the pavement. It was Friday, almost noon, the day after ...
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